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When love flew before me
Longing for beauty
It kissed me while in my arms
I learned the truth on how to love
But love didn't learn the truth about me

When faith came to me
Full of purity and hope
I touched it while in its grasp
It learned the way on what I long for
But I didn't see the truth it showed

No more for love
No more for beauty
Innocence and hope
Are all what the world needs

No need for love
No need for belief
Truth and bliss
Are all what mankind needs

Fearless lust yearning for me
It's all I see what the world knows
It caressed my face
Possessed me from hope
Its darkness, there's nothing left for me to learn

Bête noire
Devil's beauty as bêtes noires
Bête noire
Mankind possessed by bêtes noires

No more for love
No more for beauty
Innocence and hope
Are all what the world needs

No need for love
No need for belief
Truth and bliss
Are all what mankind needs

No more for love
No more for beauty
Innocence and hope
Are what we all need

No need for love
No need for belief
Truth and bliss
Are all what I need
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Working title. I can't think of a better one. Originally it was gonna be called Anathema.
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:icondarlingangel0565:
=DarlingAngel0565 Oct 13, 2012  Professional Writer
I really like this poem, because of my own personal experience I related to it deeply.
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*Stargazerium Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for both your comment and the fav :hug: :heart:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
=DarlingAngel0565 Oct 14, 2012  Professional Writer
You are most welcome :huggle: :heart:
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~Van-Dunkelschreiber Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this seams contradictory, it against faith but for truth, in yet truth and faith are intertwined, our faiths are how we defind truth.
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*Stargazerium Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's where it gets complicated. The lyric mentions that I (the subject) learned the truth on how to love, but love itself didn't learn the truth about that subject, so in other words, someone in mankind didn't learn the truth on how to love, and the lyric mentions mankind needs truth, since the world is full of lies.

And for faith, that was written on more of a personal level of experience. When faith came to me (the subject), faith from someone of mankind knows that the subject tends to trust and be loyal, but in the end, that person ended up lying to the subject, hence going back that mankind needs truth, since the world is full of lies.

Hope that makes more sense
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